YAY!!!!!! An update!! :crazylol: This part was so deep and thoughtful... Although I'm not much of a fan of Joesph I like how you pointed out how he stuck around through everything. Now you can't even get a father to call. Mike always thinkin' with his heart. Such a wonderful trait but causes him so much grief. :( I can see why he sometimes questions his relationship with Ava. Just hope once some of this blows over they can sit and talk...more so just about their relationship some more. Lucas! :censored: He's got some nerve claiming to be her fiance. :dry: He MUST be lookin' for a kick in the balls. :heha: Shawna...:cries: I won't be happy till I read/see her walk out that hospital. |
Wow.. so Mike finally sees Lucas' good for nothing ass huh?? SMH. I hope Shawna will be ok. Mike is so sweet for being there for Ava, she's really goin through it right now and she definitely needs his love and support. |
Wow Lucas is really a piece of ****. What gall to be at the hospital when he is probably the one who put her there. Poor Ava, Shawna has to get better. Cant wait for more. |
Great update nicki I knew lucas was behind shawna being in hospital:yes: He has done this to get back at mike and ava, cant wait for the next chapter x |
YAY UPDATE!!! Agh Lucas should just go...That's all I have to say |
Uuugh Lucus makes me sick! I'm glad Michael is there to comfort Ava because she really needs it. I'm very anxious to see what happens! Great update! |
Thwas a great update only one problem you left me hanging only two soon! I loved Michael's POV. He is her strength and we need more like let Michael or the Goon's kill Lucas immediately and then they can pronounce him dead and drop him out the window. Would be great but slime like that never goes away! Seriously I loved that update but I need more real soon it was well worth the wait but more soon real soon! Thanks so much loved it! |
That a great update only one problem you left me hanging only two soon! I loved Michael's POV. He is her strength and we need more like let Michael or the Goon's kill Lucas immediately and then they can pronounce him dead and drop him out the window. Would be great but slime like that never goes away! Seriously I loved that update but I need more real soon it was well worth the wait but more soon real soon! Thanks so much loved it! |
OMG, girl, I had all kinds of words to describe Mikey and his delightfully down to earty dialogue with himself, guessing and questioning his feelings and such. Then that flew right out the window with the end of the chapter and that .... that .... that NO GOOD, ROTTEN, DISGUSTING, SLEAZY, DIRTY, CROOKED AZZ MUTHER... OH, HAYUL NAW! ARGH!!!**^&*%&^%*&^$&%&^**^&%%*)*)(&*^&%$$#$%^$_(* (&&^&*^%$%^&$%#^@@!@#$$$%$ Ok, breathe. Wait for the next update, hope like hell Mikey beats his nastay azz, or he lets Bill do it. I think Bill is itching to give him a beatdown, anyway! You rock, girl. Loved it. Can't wait for the next one. Bring it, girl!:hoplol: |
Gosh,Lucas is such an a**hole!! Poor Shawna,i hope she recovers soon... :( I think Michael and Ava need to talk and work things out...I would hate if they broke up :boohoo: |
Man, this story's soooo good! Please keep going. Lucas is gonna get something.... |
Wonderful update, Nicki. I loved the whole convo Michael had with himself. And thank you for acknowledging Joseph. He is always portrayed as such an evil man in ffs and you gave him a more human side. You can say what you want about that man (he is not on my fave persons list either tbh) but he always stuck with his family through the years. Lucas........... what is there to say about that evil, slimy, sorry excuse for a man? He has some gutts telling the doctors that he is her faincé. I'm so glad that Michael and the guards are there to support Ava if he tries something. Although I just know that he probably has something up his sleeve and it will not be the last time he pops up. Please update soon... I'm dying to know if Shawna will be alright :cute:. |
We need an update badly! Please! |
Please update! I want to read more. |
Yeah, girl, how are Michael and Ava doing? Poor Shauna, how's she doing, is she recovering? I hope so. :aw: |
Thanks for the L.O.V.E. ladies and your awesome comments, you make a gal so happy! :yourock: I suck I know but I am working on an update or two :wink: things have been kinda crazy these past couple of weeks but it's coming I promise :grin: |
^^About f*cking time you got your ass into gear and wrote an update loll you know I love ya babe:wub: |
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Hahhahahahhaha no pressure then Vicky?! :wink: Thanks Suz you're a doll :wub: |
of course no pressure so tell you what let me write my coment to your last chapter first and then you can post hahahha |
Baby, baby, baby I read your latest chapter I just never commented and what a shi!ty friend I am...I am soooo sorry babe I really and soooooooo sorry but in a way I’m happy you haven’t updated because I can comment and not fall behind too much loll so let’s get into this I loved that this was in Michaels POV you gave us the opportunity to see the feelings and emotions he is going through, because let’s face it it’s not easy to just be there for your partner, especially if you dont know how they will react. I know people say just be there but what does that exactly mean?? For now although he feels insecure about allot of things and that includes his relationship with Ava he is doing just that being there for her. I know he wants to do so much more for her but until she asks him exactly what she wants him being there holding her hand, reassuring her and telling her he is by her side and that he loves her is the best thing for him to do even if she is pulling away from him. Gahhh Nicki I felt so bad for him though you really did describe his feeling perfectly, his confusion, his uncertainties, admitting his mistakes especially where his baby mommas are concerned. Beautifully written babe and the fact that he finally forgives Joe I guess Joe did what he thought was best for his children. We have to remember we tend to model after our parents unless we make a conscious choice to change that and Michael did in a way, but then where are the mothers of his kids?? Joe was there through thick and thin but he wasn’t the kindest of fathers, whereas Michael changed and was the kindest and most caring he could be but then the kids were deprived of a mother. Quote:
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Brilliant chapter babe, although I hate Lucas I have to admit I LOVE the drama and let’s face it where Lucas roams and goes the drama stinks the place up by following his dirty ass. Now Miss all I ask for is that you get your petuny ass off to work and give us an update. Love ya baby :wub: |
Urgh Vicky baby your comment was EXACTLY what I was trying to convey in this chapter - you are awesome you know that?! Damn I wish I had to time to reply to all of your comments ladies but I have to go to work! BUT I am working my lil' ass off to get this update posted this weekend so once again thats for bearing with me :yourock: |
JIVE ASS LUCAS....Must I even say more? :dry: I can't stand his triflin ass...but wait...I'll get back to him One to something more meaningful to talk about...Michael & Ava :wub: I'm glad Michael is there for Ava while she is going through this because she really does need a support system. I think she is withdrawing from is because right now she just isn't sure, and plus insecurity is playing a part in it else well because important people in her life has left her. She is just scared because she is thinking Shawna is going to leave her in death, and I don't believe that is going to happen. She might even have a feeling Michael is eventually is going to leave...it's just a lot of sh*t going on right now. I also love the fact about Michael pointing out the parenting aspect of things. I thought his feelings on that was just wisdom. People haven't experiencing a certain situation really don't know what or how it feels to do things. For example when he was talking about his father. Joe might have did all the sh*t he did, but when he was working at that steelmill he was making sure his family was fed & had clothes on his back. And Michael recognize it all & understands because he has his own children...Loved it :wub: NOW BACK to Jive ass Lucas...I hope Mike tell his ass a thing or two....Or even better yet, WHOOP HIS ASS! This clown needs it. Smdh I hope Shawna gets better and get outta that line of work also.... LOVED THE UPDATE AUNT NICKI....Can't wait for the next! |
No pressure but where is the update love this so much! I need to see MJ drop Lucas out of the nearest window soon! Thanks will try patience but not very good at it just kidding! |
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Girl,amazing update!! :D
And Shawna,will she recover? Gosh,Michael is such a sweetheart! :wub:
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Man i feel for Ava her pain is so real. Thank god she has Mike for support. |
Poor Ava, and God I am soooo glad she has Michael. I think she should move in with him. At least she'll be safe. And he truly does love her. I'm sooo glad he punched that sorry ass MF Lucas!!! I wish he coulda did more than that... But Ava doesn't need to be alone, especially now. Idk what's gonna happen with Shawna, but whatever the outcome is, I hope Ava will be alright. |
Thank you great update! He asked her to move in with him fantastic. He should have hurt Lucas worse than he did. Please more soon! |
Awww...poor Ava. :( I really hope Shawna recovers. And thank God for Michael. I'm glad he punched that a**hole. But Lucas is crazy and I'm afraid that he's up to no good with that threat he left Mike. Anyways, I enjoyed the update hun! |
Ok, girl, ummmm, dry? My azz you was dry. This update was awesome. First, Michael, you effin kick ass brotha you! You knocked that scab down a few pegs, I'd say. Then Bill, he's the best. Really, I've always loved him. Now poor Ava, and poor Shawna. She's hurting for her girl, and Michael being there for her? Priceless. He asked her to move in with him. Did he mean it, or is he just being compassionate because she's alone? I think on some levels he wants her to, but he is trying to cushion things for her, too. Girl, this was awesome. Michael knocking Lucas down was epic, cuz that slimey no good piece of :censored: deserved it, and Ava finally letting go to Michael was much needed, that's for sure. Yay! Loved it, loved it, loved it! :excitebaby: :woop: :pineapple: :claps: :smiliess: |
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Git in:hoplol: mike sure gave lukas what for:yes: Hope shawna wakes up and is ok though. Not sure if mike asked ava to move in with him cos he felt sorry for her:brow: Fab update nicki x |
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Even in tragedy, the way this couple meshes seems 'romantical'. They seem to be two lost souls that have migrated together by destiny and formed a bond. I only hope that she will 'cling' to him rather than push him away. From the grim look of things, she's going to need him now more than ever -especially since this coward-a$$ Lucas has dared show his lecherous face! :kungfufighting: Baby- I enjoyed the chapter. I'm sorry 'so' much for failing to comment sooner. It was purely an overcite. I meant to do a 2 in 1 this morning, but I'm late for my old lady nap before work. I promise, promise, promise to come back (and soon) to leave my thoughts on your latest chapter. You're taking us on a journey girl and doing a fantastic job~ |
Wth? :blink: How in the world am I just noticing this update? :pullhair: :ohmy: From Lucas's point of view. Interesting. :hmm: You, Lucas Martin, are an evil b@stard. :dry: Michael ain't ugly. You ugly. :fine: Woooooooohooooooooo Go Michael!!! :cheerleader: Break that douches nose. :heha: But oh! Think before you do something that rash...at least in public. :lol: Aww Ava :cries: My heart breaks for you girl. Sh!t Shawna's condition. :boohoo: She sounds worse that I thought. :( Quote:
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Hey Nicky!! I finally made it!! :hoplol: :pinkbounce: AUUGHHHHHH I LOVE IT! LOVE IT! LOVE IT! :pinkbounce: First off, I love how real and down-to-earth Ava is. No, the occupation she chose to pursue isn't the greatest, but you really got into detail as to why she chose it and I totally understand her desire to have the good things in life. :yes: I know she was nervous and feeling disgusting being on the arm of Lucas, knowing what he wanted her to do, but fate certainly intervened and she winds up face-to-face with the King of Pop himself??? :heat: I LOVED your description of him!! I can clearly see older Mikey in my head...illustrious dark hair, that delicious jawline I would have loved to have licked all ove-- *ahem* -- continuing on... :blush2: , the aviator shades...the concern and genuine interest on his face that he displays as Ava speaks about her experiences. The chemistry between these two is palpable and I know Ava is beyond giddy that MJ actually asked for her number! Beautifully written Nicky and I am BEYOND anxious to read the rest and eventually catch up! LOVE IT!!! LOVE IT!!! |
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Nicki, thank you for another poignant and moving chapter! I apologize again for the late reply. :bighug: |
Last update was great but I need another soon Love it so much! |
I made it through chapter ten thus far!! :hoplol: Nicky, you are so frickin' amazing!! :worthy: :worthy: I really do love the chemistry between Mike and Ava. They both are real, down-to-earth characters and I appreciate that I can relate to both of them. I really do love how they confide in each other about issues and things they wouldn't share with anyone else. They both have that 'eye contact' issue, though-- where it's better for them to speak their minds when they're not looking directly at each other. Their time in Michael's suite was steamy and very sensual. I must admit that Mike was a little on the rough side at the beginning, (but honestly, who would complain??? I know I wouldn't!! :no2: :happy:) But he did redeem himself by actually making love to her in the end. Speaking of that instance, I was kind of surprised that he quickly trusted her word with regards to birth control and STDs though. I guess li'l Mikey's needs had him feeling particularly trusting! :heha: Anyhoo, the way he treated her the morning after left me feeling crestfallen. BUT she shouldn't have been going through his things. I mean, seriously. She was going through his medications which is an ultra-private issue for Michael. I don't blame him for being angry, but he just completely shut down which made Ava, who already has low self-esteem, feel like straight-up CRAP :aw: But again, he redeemed himself with the flowers. I loved your take on Liz Taylor in this! I can imagine her speaking in that tone and saying those very words :happy: Her advice proved to be accurate as he finally got Ava to answer his calls and talk to him. It's really refereshing to see Michael being completely honest with her about his medications. He really does care for that girl and I am rooting for this couple like no other!! Great writing Nicky!!! I am in love with this story!!!! :wub: |
Hey babygirl i am soooo verrry sorry to be so late in the game I feel horrible I have negelcted you and its not forgivable but i have to tell you I'm very, very, very sorry for this baby and i feel like a sh*t....please forgive me:blush2: I have to tell you I was sooo excited that you finally posted and then when i started reading I realised that it was Lucas's POV WTF???? Muther f*cker, i hate this man so much, his arrogance and his pompous ass wreaks of sh*t. He thinks that his sh*t dont stink and yet his stinks up the most. Who does he thinks he is?? Acting like he gives a crap about Shawna?? I saw right through his act but then when he showcased his arrogance with this... Quote:
HELLLL NOOO!!!! This piece of sh*t, muther f*cking, asshole, asswipe, low grade scum, who the hell do you think you are?? and then talking to Ava like that and Michael?? you think your ass is all that, the hell you are, this man you are bad mouthing is the one that took care of Ava, loves her unconditionally and you were going to use her and have her as your own personal cash cow and yet hes the one you think is a loser??? Gahhhhhhhhhhh Nicki baby I tell you the way you wrote this man OMFG you are a genius babe...the emotions you evoked from me, the hatred I have for this man was unbelievable, I was soooooo close to throwing my lappy out the window. You really went into Lucas's phyche, you delved right into him you really wrote him well, you brought the arrogance through and you brought out the hatred i have for him, BRAVO baby!!!!! But then the sky opened up and I heard the angels sing ALLLLLELUHIA, AAAAALELUHIA....... Quote:
Thats what I'm talking about baby, Michael you gorgeous hunk of a man, you are the sexiest mofo there ever was, and then the punch although something he wouldnt condone, gooooodddddd he wasss sooooo hot such a turn on. Michael THATS WHAT IMMA TALKING ABOUT!!!!!! Yeah baby!!!!!! That was the most brilliant thing I have ever read, that "WHACK" was the sweetest music to my ears. Quote:
WOW this just really had me crying, this really gripped my heart and squeezed it tight, your descriptions of this moment had my heart racing, I felt like I was in the room watching them looking at her limp lifeless body. I cringed at the way she was lying lifeless and OMFG how could anyone do this to her?? How could they do it?? NIIIICKI you have to fix this NOW!!!!! I cant imagine how they found her, she must have been barely alive. She is just unrecognisable and my heart broke for Ava but for Michael too, because he felt so helpless in this situation with his girl. Again you wrote Michael brilliantly, I felt the anger and menace within him in the beggining and them to the helplesness and desperation he felt for Ava....OMG such an array of emotions and they flowed together, i never felt the pause that somethimes you feel, that transition. NOOOOO with this chapter it flowed effortlesly, it just made it sound and read brilliantly. Gahhhhh then we go to Avas POV and before I delve into hers I love how you continued the story and didnt overlap it. I loved how you did that....after reading Avas POV i died, you killed me, you really literally killed me. Again your descriptions were amazing, this was amazing, i felt like i was Ava, not seeing her but being her. Quote:
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If I was crying before this broke me down, this killed me gahhh NIckiiiii what do you do to me gurrrrrl, loved the prayer loved it how Michael said it with her even though he isnt Catholic. I trully love how he embraces her and everything that has to do with her. Then he asked her to move in??? OMFG, OMFG, OMFG that had my jaw dropping to the ground. WOW I didnt expect that to happen, i really didnt expect it babe you shocked me soooo much, that flash of pity she saw I hope she mistaken it for hurt, because her ass is stubborn. *sigh* All I have to say that this was a brilliant chapter and you came back with a bang............I LOVED IT from start to finish. You outdid yourself baby, I hope that you update soon. You know I hate to pressure and I dont have the right since I was late but i loooove this story and everyone here agrees with me. PLEAAAAAAAAAAAAASE update!!! You ROCK babe, you rock my world and everything in it. Thank you soooo much for sharing honey love ya :wub: |
this story is so F*CKING good! i love it from start to finish! I am so hooked! plz update ASAP PLUS Can u send me all the PMs? dont worry about the age. I am almost 22. |
Tak your time and give us an update when you can. Even though I am ready to kick Lucas right where it counts and I agfree it may not be easy for her to move in with gorgeous but I still feel it is best. This is so great but so sad for poor Shawna but Michael will take care of his woman so I will sit quietly and wait for another powerhouse update! |
I just starting reading this story and I really love it! I as wondering if I could please have Ch. 6 and possibly the others so that I can catch up and finsh reading! :hoplol: I also love how you insert pictures into the text! Thank you for this awesome story! :yeahbaby: |
Ok, girl. Tag, you're IT! I updated, now it's your turn! Na na na na na, na! :sofahide: Ha, just kidding. I finally did, but it's not easy, I know. But you teased me, and one good turn does deserve another, right, girl? :slem: |
Hey Nicki....I finally made it...:cheerleader::cheerleader: Amazing,excellent story...Michael and Ava..they're so in love,but they have their past,their insecurities,their fears.They're each other's shelter and safety. I hate Lucas so much...he's so arrogant,insensitive,cruel jerk...I cannot even begin to tell you,what a great satisfaction was for me when Michael broke his stupid nose.That's our man...soft spoken,gentle and funny,but he takes no sh!t....he gave this jerk his piece of mind...GO ON MIKE:cheerleader::cheerleader::cheerleader::cheerl eader: The whole scene with Shawna,broke my heart...it was so well written that I could picture this poor girl,laying there almost lifeless.I could feel Ava's despair,she lost so many people in her life...she has only Shawna and Michael...I could feel her fear of remaining all alone.I hope she'll move in with Michael,I hope she doesn't think he said it out of pity,cause he loves her and he's there for her!!! Excellent story Nicki...I'm officially addicted to it...can't wait for more!!!! |
BEST ROMAAAAAAAAAANCE!!!! CONGRATS AUNT NICKI :wub: |
Please pm me I'm a new reader. Thanx ~ coolkat |
:pinkbounce:CONGRATUALTIONS ON BEST ROMANCE:pinkbounce: You deserve every bit of the win this is awesome babe LOVE YOU |
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CONGRATULATIONS, GIRL! :strawberry: :excitebaby: :djparty: :dance: :yes: :roflmao: :worthy: |
Congrats Nicki. You deserve it :yes: |
Thank you for the PMs Nicki :yes: |
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| schaney | 4th April 2011 02:29 PM |
CONGRATULATIONS!
PLEASE UPDATE!
PLEASE UPDATE!
Ooo- .... I can't wait!!! :crazylol: I'm so proud of you honey~ :bighug: |
Can't wait I have missed it so much! |
bay bay is back YAY!!!!!!!!! Cannot wait my love to see your brilliance on screen once more love you so much gurl :wub: |
CONGRATZ!!!!!!! NICKI!!! I hope you'll update soon Girl xx |
Hay, gurrrrlllllll! Congrats, again. Can't wait till you update. I totally understand the BLOCK, too. whoo hoo! Bring it, Nicki baby! |
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Hey Nicki, I found this story today only !!!!! I've read the first chapters and found them great, very good, could send PM's? Thank You !!!!!! :signthankspin::signthankspin: |
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No worries, girl. We'll get there. Hopefully we'll have a few readers left when we do, huh? :hoplol: Well, you can read mine and I'll read yours! :lol: |
I am sure there is a legitmate reason for lack of updates and I am sure it will change soon! I sure hope so because if you don't you may have to bury me from fatal heartbreak! Love it so much! Love ya girl! |
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Chapter 18 Hey, I just read chapter 18, I'm out of step with my heart, frightened, it was so real, thought Lucas after drugging her was going to do something very bad for her. I was relieved when Charlene called Michael. My heart calmed down now. Let me keep reading .... Guy, I'm fascinated by the story and the way you write. Congratulations. :yourock::yourock::yourock::yourock: :cheerleader::cheerleader::cheerleader: |
CONGRATULATIONS Nicki, Babe! :hoplol: |
I just read the whole story. Poor Shawna anyone deserves it, Poor Ava, probably loses the only person who his family and that after all helped in this life. Lucas is a villain, I hope he never finds Ava alone, he can make you very bad. I hope that Michael can help Ava, she might not survive without your support. Congratulations Nicki, here was a GREAT story, moved me in every chapter. Thank you! :signthankspin::signthankspin::signthankspin::sign thankspin: :worthy::worthy::worthy::worthy::worthy::worthy: :yourock::yourock::yourock::yourock: |
I Lucas should have his balls cut off mmmm then roasted and made him eat them hahahaha ok in all honesty i think that Michael and Ava need one another Michael needs to show her that he is there for her even if he feels aprehension. I hope she moves in with him....I want her cousin to get better and that thing called Lucas to suffer yeah suffer and have him whimpering like a b*tch. |
AMEN Vicky! |
Yessssssssssss !!!!! I'm so happy that you'll return to update .... I loved this story, I could not stop reading. As for future events I hope that Lucas can not do anything bad for Ava Shawna, poor thing, would probably die, because his injuries were too severe. Perhaps Michael doubt about the love Ava feels for he is really the problem between them, maybe she also thinks he is with her only out of pity because she is alone. But if everything was like I want, there would be no drama, so there would be no story .... Thanks for this story !!!!!! :signthankspin::signthankspin::signthankspin: :yourock::yourock::yourock::yourock: |
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SHADY= GRACE....yeah...MmmmHmmm :dry: CONGRATULATIONS ON BEST WRITER!! YOU DESERVE IT AUNTY!! :wub: :D |
Thanks Ladies for your requests, they have been duly noted and I'm in the process of working though an update now :yes: Much love to everyone who responded :bighug: |
You have me left I will never leave you! I agree with all of Kathy's things she would like to see! I would like their relationship brought out more in the open with his family and build a deeper relationship between those two, and more but that is unrealistic at this time!Really all I want is more especially like their birthday celebration! Need to know more about her cousin's prognosis and the future! |
Im still here too girl waiting patiently. Tapping my fingers. |
Congrats Nicki! You deserve it :D :bighug: |
Congratulations nicki on best writer well done :pinkbounce: |
Aw thanks so much for the love ladies. You're all so loyal and I love ya to bits :bighug: It's coming....... :wink: |
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CONGRATULATIONS! I AM Begging and Pleading when is my update coming! I am in major withdrawal and I miss you! I even miss Lucas does that tell you how bad I got it! Luv you girl! |
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Hey, I love your stories, please let me know where you will post them later. The community crazyoverjm.com is very nice, you could check .... Anyway thank you for sharing your stories with us. Thank You! |
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:pinkbounce: Best news of tonight! |
NICKKKKKKIIIIIIIII you bet we are going to the new site, we have to keep all the stories in one place i cant wait to make the move now and if we do it together then we will all be good love ya me sexilicous girl |
