| middy | 24th October 2010 03:00 PM |
Oh another great chapter nicki im so glad she explained everything to michael.
And glad mikes gonna sort out that scumbag lucas.
I love Ava and Mike and happy that they are in lurveee :aw:
Brilliant update hun x
And glad mikes gonna sort out that scumbag lucas.
I love Ava and Mike and happy that they are in lurveee :aw:
Brilliant update hun x
Great Update Nicki. I love the way you write. I'm glad that they told each other how they feel and that Michael is gonna take care of Lucas. |
Woww,amazing update girl! I hope this Lucas guy dissapears!! xD |
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For me, this chapter was the most heart wrenching, but at ends that are polar opposite to each other... joy <<<<-------->>>> pain A real tear-jerker because I could literally 'feel' the intensity of his love for her....OMG! Nicki! This was pure PASSION!!! I'm a true fan of romance and I could feel the pulse of their love for one another... She in her quest to protect him and he in his fear of what could have been happening behind his back... They are just :cupidwub:... Your illustrations were just OUTSTANDING and evoked POWERFUL feelings of both falling in/being in love.... Nicki, this was 'so' good for me that I won't even ruin this post by mentioning yukface (except to say kickazzMike)... Thank you for putting your heart into this update... I could FEEL it and the feeling is nothing short of amazing~ |
Yaaaaaay, love love loved! this chapter. I'm so glad she told him about Lucas and how she feels. Can't wait for more:D |
Thank you for updating :D Im glad that she tell mike about it.. Now mike his bodyguards can handle it.. Beat that Mo'Fo so hard that he can't uses his thing anymore hahaha.. Anyway can't wait for that PM :slem: |
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WAIT!!! :stop:.... Can he 'find' it??? :dontknow: I just picture him as some fat, nasty, greasy head, cigar smoking, pot-bellied pig with a little d*ck and no n*ts!!! :grin: |
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Whahaha now you're got me really hard laughing :toofunny2: I don't really have a clue how he looks like, maybe I don't wanna know:yuk: |
| kajexa03 | 25th October 2010 05:08 PM |
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Originally Posted by sexyeyes (Post 785235) You're so clever!! :slem: :smug: :heha: This was definitely the most emotional chapter I've written so far for a few reasons but mainly because I wish Michael had had someone to love in real life at the end... maybe he did... who knows, but it was hard to write all the same. :boohoo: I can see how... My heart was twisted in knots while reading it... There was thump..... thump.... then - thumpthumpthumpthumpthump....You know I'm there with you, too - hoping that he experienced a real, deep, emotional love on a spiritual level with another human being that was not transient. He gave it so well and deserved the same in return.... As for the "not since...." line, well I guess I left that blank for the reader to insert who they think Michael's real love was... (although I think on this subject we share the same views :wink: ) That makes YOU clever my dear... Regarding our views being the same??? You would be right! :fine: But you're a dear to consider all of your readers' opinion. We realize how good we've got it! You girls are too funny with your Lucas bashing :yuk: indeed!! I guess I picture him as some suave looking wanna be gansta with a fro but Kathy ~ you're description of him is even better :wink: |
Suave??? Like... egw! :sick:
Pass me a bucket!!! :vomit:
I'm going search for and find an image that fits what I see in my head everytime you write about Lucas and ain't s**t suave about him, honey! :wink: I imagine him looking like... like... Frank Dileo!!!! :tlaugh:
*holds out hands*, :whistle:, *and waits for slap* :heha:
| kajexa03 | 25th October 2010 05:33 PM |
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Originally Posted by sexyeyes (Post 785279) "hey sweet thangs... gimme a call if you ever wanna get paid!!" Egwww.... :yuk: *smh* I guess all pimps are not washed-up old dudes with pot bellies, receding hairlines, and p*nis erectile dysfunction!!! :tlaugh: Or young, thugged-out cats with 14k grills, stacks, cadillacs, and canes with solid gold handles on the tops!!! :heha: That is just.... just... too gross for words... I just wish it was MJ pulling over and saying that to me cuz I know he was up in Vegas around the same time I was!! Could you imagine that??!! :roflmao: I woulda done ANYTHING and for FREE for him - damn I woulda been his sex slave if he asked me too!!! :slem: |
:brow: Oh really??? Then YOU would be the chick getting roasted on MJ fan boards all over the world!!!! But I bet you wouldn't care would you??? Not with that nine inch long souvenir and permanent bowed legs!!! :hoplol:
OFFICIAL NEW FAN OVER HERE!!! :dance: BRILLIANT STORY!!! :cupidwub: |
Hmm girl when is that PM commin?? I Can't wait :wink: |
| MJlover01 | 27th October 2010 09:33 PM |
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Hi Els. Ok so I have nearly finished the PM ~ do you want a little taster? I have the first part all ready to go... but the good stuff is taking a little while longer to finish and it won't be posted until Friday.... you see I'm going to watch Thriller Live tomorrow night :excitebaby: so I won't be able to get online at all tomorrow as I'm also working in the day so the earliest I can get the PM up is Friday? I don't want to give you all a sneak peak and then keep you hanging until Friday... unless that's what you want? Let me know girl x |
Girl have much fun at Thriller Live, I'ts a really cool show, I've been there already for 3 times here in The Netherlands. I guess that the show is nice if I already seen it 3 times, isn't it? :wink:
Woww girl,this chapter was rather HOT!! :thud: I love when you do chapters like this! :slem: xD I love this story! :) |
NICKI NICKI NICKU GIRRRRRRRRRLLL:heat: I have no words..... You have totally outdone yourself with this pm That was stunninly hot Fab chapter hun x |
Great update gurl!! Pheeww GUURRLL! That PM was HOOTT!! She really laid it good on him huh lmao. So yea she absolutely did accomplish her mission. They really are some kinky lovers..dayuummm! |
Hey Nicki girrlll!!!! U know I want that damn PM and I WANT IT NOW!!!! XD Hun, I can't wait! Another amazing chapter as always and I'm sure it'll be an even more AMAZING -ER PM!!! XD Can't wait hun!! Take care! Love ya! L.O.V.E. xXVx |
Amaazing update, as always! Wow, she really did go 'all out' for Mike, huh? :hoplol: Loving this story, & I'll take that PM too haha <3 |
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NICKI!!!! GIIIRRRRLLLL!!!! I have f-ing flatlined at the teaser!!!!! *________________* What the h*ll???? Your illustrations are too amazing for words... this scene was 'so' beautifully set - so wonderfully written.... babygirllllll- s.p.e.e.c.h.l.e.s.s. Going off to read the PM and I will return... Thank you.thankyou.thankyou... :airkiss: The 'prelude' is setting this chapter up to be the best ever!!!! I 'so' love your fic - your imagination - your writing~ Superb job, girl and I haven't YET laid eyes on the PM... |
NICKKKKKIIIIIII I finally have caught up, 2 down 1 to go, Kathy you're next baby Wel well well, MR. JACKSON in all his glorious self. First LOVE that its older Mike gahhhhhhh I can just drool at his hottness actually just thinking of older MJ makes me wanna do more than that LOLLL and Ava baby!!!!! I swear I LOVE, LOVE, LOVE this story I am in awe of your talent girl and can i just say that LOVE how we think the same with the PM chapters LOLLL baby replace the N with a V and you're Vicki and vica verca.... Lucas pffft scumbag, i hope he got what was coming to him, you never told us what happened to him and I'm so glad that Michael kids like her... Babe I'm still reeling from the last PM chapter fuucken awesome loved every single word, the descriptions lordy lord have mercy on me and shower??? did you say shower??? can you possibly be soooooo good to us and give us a double PM??? common bae you can do it why not it is his 50th birthday!!!!! PLEAAAASE comon baby give in to my demands LOLLL Thanks babe for your story cant wait to finally join in on the fun Are you ready for me baby??? |
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Nicki, girl - I can't even hang tonight. I gotta go to bed for work before too long, but I'll be hollerin' atcha fo'sho tomorrow. Vicky, I get to play with you on yet another thread... :mmm:.... It's gonna be 'so' much funnnnnnn~ |
PM me as fast as you can, girl! Thank you! |
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you know 50 is a BIG deal and its a bday that the man will deffinately not forget soo make us not forget too NICKKKKKKKKIIIIIIIII DO it babe!!!!!! You know you've got it in you :slem: |
Got the second part, thanks. WOOOO...EEEE, now I gotta say girl, that I have no doubt he had a good birthday:yes:. Haha great stuff as per usual. I'm so glad that Lucas hasn't come between them at all and once again can't wait for the next chapter!!! :happy: |
Nicki, Wow what a PM....I love your writing girl...When she cuffed him that was so hot..then when she went **** on him Oh My God!!! Your descriptions are perfect. Hot Hot Hot...I loved it...Thank you |
Hey I'm a new reader here^^. I really like your story, could you pm me the chapters? Thank you =) |
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I still haven't ventured over to the PM, hunny 'cuz I'm working and trying to finish moving... Gotta clean up the old place and Dad's birthday dinner is tomorrow, but you're high on my list of MJJB things to do, baby!!! Reading some of the replies thus far... I might need to take my heart and blood pressure medication before I read.... |
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Wonderful Story |
Wow. That was one memorable night for me too! Great stuff! |
sexyeyes, you've outdone yourself on this one! Both part 1 and 2 were awesomely written. That is one birthday, he is never going to forget. I am soooo glad Ava was able to do that for him! I can't believe he had never allowed her until then to go there I am sure now that he's got a taste of what she can do, he will let her go there as many times as she wants to. I really love how you write the scenes and emotions flowing through the characters at the time. I am also loving where the relationship is going. Thanks for bringing us this wonderful story and please give us more! |
Hayy Girl, Thank you for posting and sending me that HOT PM,, It was soo good.. And by now on I love that song Sex Therapy.. Im going on sex therapy by now :lol: |
Nicki???? That PM had me at work going: )*@$)*($&YRJHKRFJKF*(@&$&*E$HNDW*(U&@$U*(W()EUJ @$@)($U@WIOEJIODEH*(W&*$@^&*$TY@WUIEHWIOUR( @#()*($(U@#Y$*(@HJU$@#&U$@#*(^$opik9045i80-4i9-0!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I fainted 99 times and came back to life only to faint again!!! Everything from the playlist, the strip tease, the LIP service.... GIRL!!!!! I was horny as H*LL at my desk just imagining doing all that stuff to an older, mature, more experienced MJ after stripping off that suit??? What???? I was blubbering in an unknown language!!! Girl, I had almost forgotten what she wanted to do to him for a while (and I never forget details like that), but when you gave the probable reason why he wouldn't let her - I saw a long, thick, heavy, juice-laden pole which is a combination of light (vanilla) and dark (chocolate) swirled and imagined slobbering on it!!!! My word!!! And his hands were tied?? The description of him trying his d*mndest to :censored: her face???? :thud: You f-ing rocked this PM!!!! And girlllllll you KNOW how much I like that savage, half-way violent BEAST that he's been keeping in the cage since the first encounter... Then she mentions that the TIGER has returned!!! Him SLAMMING her against the walls with her legs pried apart just ripped.me.UP!!!! AND.THAT.SONG.HE.SANG.TO.HER.WHILE.POWER-DRIVING.HER.INTO.OBLIVION???? :thud: *smh* Some dayyum birthday... Homes don't even lay.the.pipe like a 50-year-old man the way he had her cooch screaming!!!! Bring on the shower.... for them.... and for me! :wink: This chapter was the fizz-I-fyre, honey!!!! You f-ing ROCK!!!! |
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Girrrrl,update soon! I think i'm getting addicted to this story! xD |
| Ingridje | 2nd November 2010 02:31 AM |
New reader here. Amazing storyline !! And you write really well. Would you be so kind to send me the pm parts so that I can complete my reading ?
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Thanks
Grrr Grrrrrrrr waiting patiently grrrrrrrrrrr |
Thanks, babe, for those PMs. My doctor will be pleased to know he can add billable hours whilst I get treatment for my escalating blood pressure! :mmm: Gasp, drool, dream! Dang, baby, LOVIN' EVERY MINUTE, right up to that HAWT AS HELL PM you sent! Keep going, girl. We want more! Oh, please may we have some more? The doctor told me to try to keep still, keeps the pressure down! :slem: |
Girl, You did it again,, I Can see them lovemaking in that shower.. And that scene reminds me of my first time in that special way,, Only my Ex didn't pop that question, what would be a big big no by this time :wink: I felt the same feelings what Ava now is feeling. :cupidwub: |
Woowww girrrrrrl!! That was even better than part 2!! xD You're an amazing writer! |
Ok, DAMN, GIRL! DAYUM! I'll be in the shower, too! The cold one! Now that they've used the defibrillator to get my heart going, I need to cool off still, so I'll be in the shower, sans the oil and champagne. But my thoughts will stray. Oh, yes they will. :blush2: Oh, BTW, I wanted to add that I thought you were gonna kill me with Michael singing my favorite, FAVORITE Nine Inch Nails song, oh, my stars can you just imagine him singing that song to you, gettin busy gettin done? Then the shower, and the oil, and the ... the ... THUD! Paramedics! She's coding over here! |
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And that lip service he gave her whilst only supported by his shoulders and the wall??? :thud: The shower was gorge-je-mor-riffical!!!!!! Very sexy, update girl... Very hot~ |
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Girllll!! You know I've been screaming about how much I love THE BEAST since the first encounter!!! I'm like hot DAYYYUUUMMM, MJ bruising the wrists and other sensitive, delicate parts??? :thud: I'm glad you didn't let him roughouse her the first time... It probably would have banged (literally) the 'love' theory to high h*ll if he'd been that insensitive. Nah, what he did was perfect for them... Perfect for this stage of their love affair. H*ll, he already thinks of her as being unparalled to any in his sexual life!!! After offering him the 'tightest circle', dayyum if he won't be changing his will!!! :hoplol: And for the part I quoted: let MJ's sexy azz come ANYWHERE near me at night... I'mma grab him by his halo, pull him back down to earth, and desecrate him so bad that the angels are going to tell him 'Heaven Can Wait' - stay right there in Tennessee a while longer with sex-shal chaw-colate!!!! :mmm: |
Om my god nicki could your pms get any hotter:shocked: That was hotter than the last chapter:drool: Great update x |
OMG!!!!!!:dance::claps: If I thought the last one was hot this one was even hotter!!!!! And what he said!!!!! Will they or won't they!!!!!:woop: I can't wait for the next update!!! |
OMG! Another PM! Pm me please! :) |
| vicky | 2nd November 2010 10:42 PM |
FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUCK MEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!
What did I say to you??? We are twins seperated at birth, MY GOD WOMAN!!!!! LOVED IT, LOVED IT, LOVED IT
DAMN he laid into her, smacked a big red label on her ass saying this ass is MINE!!!!! and gave it to her good and proper.
AS for the BEAST hell ya the beast wants to play now, hell ya the devilish minx that she is lured him out of hiding thats what IMMA TALKING ABOUT!!!!!! and glad that QMD can give you the inspiration to create this shower masterpiece, but baby we have the same smut brain, twiny I HAVE FOUND YOU!!!!!
BABY what a way to wake up, I woke up it was posted, I read it I went and had my cold shower, which did nothing because all I kept thinking was THE SHOWER and now I'm ready for hubby to come home in 7 hrs fuuuuck the boy had no idea what will hit him tonight LOLL
Now the marriage proposal, damn Ava issssss goooooood I mean to get that out of an ass squeeze baby you had me wondering who really laid it down...
AMAZING chapter babe and thanks for the dedication :blush2: you didnt dissapoint love ya baby:wub:
What did I say to you??? We are twins seperated at birth, MY GOD WOMAN!!!!! LOVED IT, LOVED IT, LOVED IT
DAMN he laid into her, smacked a big red label on her ass saying this ass is MINE!!!!! and gave it to her good and proper.
AS for the BEAST hell ya the beast wants to play now, hell ya the devilish minx that she is lured him out of hiding thats what IMMA TALKING ABOUT!!!!!! and glad that QMD can give you the inspiration to create this shower masterpiece, but baby we have the same smut brain, twiny I HAVE FOUND YOU!!!!!
BABY what a way to wake up, I woke up it was posted, I read it I went and had my cold shower, which did nothing because all I kept thinking was THE SHOWER and now I'm ready for hubby to come home in 7 hrs fuuuuck the boy had no idea what will hit him tonight LOLL
Now the marriage proposal, damn Ava issssss goooooood I mean to get that out of an ass squeeze baby you had me wondering who really laid it down...
AMAZING chapter babe and thanks for the dedication :blush2: you didnt dissapoint love ya baby:wub:
| vicky | 2nd November 2010 11:03 PM |
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Originally Posted by sexyeyes (Post 790257) :roflmao: :toofunny: Doll you have my sides splitting over here :yourock: You know I just had to go there!! I was racking my brains thinking how am I ever gonna live up to Vickys awesome PM's?!?! So I went for the obvious. I thought you'd appreciate it hun, I swear you totally inspired it with your amazing story. In my opinion no one oes 'there' enough lol nawww baby thanks for the compliment but I swear its good to know I'm not the only one who thinks like this my twiny:wub: I was reading chapter 10 of QMD earlier and I was counting the similarities between these past 2 PM's of mine and it was way too freaky how my brain thinks like yours. I swear on MJ himself it was only today that I'd gotten around to reading chapter 10 and when I got to the table set up with goodies I was like ~ waaaaay tooooo spooky!!! LOLLL how freaky is it??? when I was reading your Part 2 of chapter 11 I kept thinking the same we are kindred smut spirits LOLLL baby I believe you no need to swear otherwise you would have left a coment...and the table of goodies I KNOW!!!!!!! I love your brain But of course your chapter 7 was the inspiration for the shower scene :drool: :toofunny: Your poor hubby ain't gonna know whats hit him! Let him have it girrrrrlll :slem: he will get it good baby poor man he really has no idea whats coming to him and its all your fault LOLL As for the marriage proposal? :roflmao: Totally tongue in cheek and heat of the moment on Mikey's part. But that'll be addressed in the next chapter :slem: Thanks for reading hun. Love ya more xoxo |
pfff... i'm dead :drool::heat::blush::thud: i'll leave you a comment when i regain concienceness.... |
I HAVE CAUGHT UP!! BREAK OUT THE CONFETTI...LETS GET IT GOING! :dance::excitebaby::pineapple:....well I gotta read chapter 11 but I wanna comment NOW! :ph34r: First thang First, Lucas? :dry: this jive ass turkey :nono: worked on my nerve since I first read a dialogue from this clown! I'm glad Ava didn't subject herself to being under his wing because Lord knows...But the only good thing about Lucas is that he introduced Michael and Ava :wub:! AND THAT WAS THE ONLY GOOD THING!! AND I CAN'T WAIT FOR LUCAS ASS TO GET GOT...ITS ABOUT THAT TIME! I bet slipped that drug in Ava's drink :dry: Moving along to Javon and Bill acting a bit withdrawn from Ava. I got the impression that they just know how things were with Michael and pass females. I think they just feel/felt like it was going to lead down the same meaningless path that it always did, and they probably didn't want to see Michael go through any type of emotional pain...just a shot in the dark... I LOVED THE INTERACTION BETWEEN MICHAEL AND HIS KIDS :blush2::wub:! And Ava fit right in with the family and that just made it all wholesome & warm :D But HOLD ON :stop: Grace? He had relations with her and she still around? Michael, baby...don't you know what type of drama that can cause? I know you know Grace wasn't gonna let you get it in with Ava without saying a word, or causing some type of drama. And you saying Grace should get over it?...ya nickname is BIG MIKE, how you figure Grace is just gonna let it go that easy? :hmm: I smellDRAMA...and the "D" is for dirty...because Grace ain't gonna let it fly smoothly... I know how I jumped and skipped around but Ava & Michael both have these dreams. Michael have them about the abuse from his dad right? And Ava didn't wanna let her daddy go in her dream :cries: I was just like WHOA! Talk about the emotions with that one! I LOVE THEIR CHEMISTRY! I had to have a :nono: moment at Mike though after he banged and I mean BANGED:slem::crazylol::thud: my girl Ava. I understand Ava was all up in the mix with the pills but :stop: MICHAEL...you know yo ass could have handled the situation better! AND THEN THE NIGHT SHE STAYED OVER?!!! :rescue: AND THE PHONE SEX?!!! :rescue: Aunt Nicki....I know I gotta read Chpt 11. & I see it's a PM within that...I gotta get ready for another :rescue: I LOVE IT AUNT NICKI!!!!! I'M ALL SUCKED IN...OFF TO CHAPTER 11 |
| -OFFtheWall- | 4th November 2010 01:18 AM |
:rescue: :thud: :rescue: again...:drool: :rescue: <---ALL THANKS TO CHAPTER 11 :D
| -OFFtheWall- | 4th November 2010 01:37 AM |
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LOVED IT IS MORE LIKE IT :slem::wub: Giiiirl did he ask her to marry him?! In the heat of passion?!
AVA STAND UP AND GIVE YOURSELF A ROUND OF APPLAUSE
Wow, that was some chapter!!! |
Yeah, I like the BEAST, too! lol |
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Okaii I am soooo sorry for responding so late lol. I've read ur PM chappy and all i gotta say was DAAAYYYUUMMM!! Dat was one hot,steammy chappy! Heck all of them were! Gooodd Michael is sooo hot and he's so kiinnkkyyyyy! Man I know she must feel really good right now and that was a very good b-day for Mike! I am jsut a lil speechless...wow :) Great job gurl! Can't wait for the next update! |
Ok, so I'm off the ventillator, breathing on my own again. My heart rate has come down to a realistic, human level. Now would be a good time for me to go take it easy somewhere, not take any chances, right? HAYUL NAW! I want MORE :hoplol::no2::bleh::happy::yes::hoplol: :mmm: :wink: Please??? |
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Okay..... So, the magical MJJB fairy hereby grants your respite. After all, we know Ava's azz (literally) needs a break! :) You may give us ONE chapter of your choosing, then all bets are off! Back to another PM, baby! :slem: It's for your good. We don't want you getting rusty or lazy... :fine: Btw... You are my Sis and I really love you. Don't be corrupting my Baby after I've worked so hard to set a good example for her! :angel: |
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I mean seriously listen to these words "Let me lick you up and down Til you say stop Let me play with your body baby Make you real hot Let me do all the things you want me to do Cuz tonight baby I wanna get freaky with you I love the taste of whipcream Spread it on don't be mean (baby don't be mean) You know I can't resist you girl I'll fly you all around the world (all around the world, oh baby) I wanna make your body drip C'mon let me take a sip (c'mon, c'mon, c'mon) Take off what you cherish most (c'mon,c'mon, come on, come on baby) Cuz when I brag I like to brag and boast" |
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| kajexa03 | 5th November 2010 10:43 PM |
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Originally Posted by vicky (Post 792019) Geeez being the middle sister sometimes sucks, must I always remind you two of how freaky dinky we all are??? SIS What do you expect when our younger minds were perverted from our older sis??? Its all your fault and now ahhh well now we"condition" our nieces mind |
Who me? :blush: I'm an :angelplease:
All I ask is that y'all keep it in the closet, but NO!! First Tree... Now Jazzi... They know their MJJB Mom is pure as the driven snow and their Aunts??? Well.... Just refer to that VERY KINKY song up top! :slem: I'm trying to bring my lovelies up in the right, UNinformed way. They need to stay pure... Untainted.... .......
Like the Mommy person... :fine:
| vicky | 5th November 2010 11:03 PM |
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Originally Posted by sexyeyes (Post 792029) :toofunny: GIRL I SWEAR WE COME FROM THE SAME EGG AND WAS SEPARATED AT BIRTH!!!! This song is in my STHST playlist on my iPod!!! These songs were totally the inspiration of the last PM and her little lap dance!!! All of these songs are my favs for real and I kid you not Keith Sweat's is the VERY FIRST SONG on this playlist!!!! OMG you are SO LIKE MY TWIN!!! and any guy who LASTS THE ENTIRE LENGTH OF THIS PLAY LIST I'MMA GONNA MARRY :toofunny: cuz I haven't found one YET!!! (apart from Mikey baby in my head :wink:) LOLL the fact that you have a playliswt seals the deal. SO DO I!!!!! Oooo but I must say forgot some of those in mine ones that I have but you might want to check out... Silk "Freak Me" Ne-Yo "Say It" Bobby Brown "All Day All Night" (for the more romantic chaps) Darren Hayes "Insatiable" Usher "Making Love" (yes I know me and romance) Usher "Do It To Me" Whitesnake "Is This Love" (super love song) Boys II Men "Uhh Ahh" Alicia Keys "Unthinkable" Britney Spears "Get Naked (I Got A Plan)" Prince "I Love You In Me" |
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BAHAHAHAHAHAHA seriously you're trying to pass that innocent act on us??? HAHAHAHAHAHA you made my day oh and the halo some angel came by asking for it she said Halloweens over now give it back
| kajexa03 | 5th November 2010 11:50 PM |
Vicki?? :toofunny:
I was BORN with this halo and I shall DIE with it! :fine:
And to prove my wholesome purity, I admit that I don't know HALF the songs y'all mentioned. *crosses fingers, toes, AND eyes*!!!
Nicki, I stole that sit on the face section from YOUR diary! :tlaugh:
I was BORN with this halo and I shall DIE with it! :fine:
And to prove my wholesome purity, I admit that I don't know HALF the songs y'all mentioned. *crosses fingers, toes, AND eyes*!!!
Nicki, I stole that sit on the face section from YOUR diary! :tlaugh:
Ok, so I'm not totally sure what y'all's on about, the older and younger sisters, etc. But, as for freaky playlists, I got a few I would add, or a few that are in mine, which would have fit nicely in that hotel room. SWV w/Missy Elliot: Can We? Paula Cole w/Missy Elliot: Feeling Love Prince: Get Off (23 positions in a one night stand!) Ginuwine: Pony, In Those Jeans Another Level: Freak Me TLC: Red Light Special Sugabees: Freak Me Tonight Christina Aguilara: Nasty Naughty Boy (OMG, there's an MJ vid with this!) Robin Thicke: Sex Therapy The Isley Brothers: Between The Sheets (Classic) Toni Braxton: You're Making Me High Christina Aguilara: Dirty Usher: Nice n' Slow Ok, I have more, but...........:blush2::blush2::blush2::blush2::blu sh2::blush2: |
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Babe sh!t I dforgot about Christina and fgood old ms.Braxton mmmm and Usher Nice n' Slow, YOU HAVE MORE :crazylol::crazylol::crazylol::crazylol: Gurrrrrl you better post them, you better share no need to blush here, we're freaky deaky here LOLL and after that shower scene?? WOOO besides I need new inspiration for my smut writting LOLL |
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Ahh, new reader here...this is absolutely amazing. Could you please send me the PM chapters? |
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Vicky baby, we're ready when you are for our next smut fix!!! I know I am... A chick ain't getting no play lately so I'm living vicariously through this Board! :heha: |
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| FaLLeN_aNgeL | 8th November 2010 03:30 PM |
Girrrrrl,update soon!
I'm really addicted! xD
I'm really addicted! xD
Yeah baby! With Suzmary on my side, I can take you two young'uns! Lol... :hmm:, I think we need to start with the corruption on my girls!! :wink: :laughehe: :friends: ... You ladies are just 'oodles' of fun! *sings Sister Sledge* "We are family"!!!! I LOVE the idea of being another Jackson family, Nicki. There's a whole heaping lot of 'em!!! |
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I love our expanding Fam too!!! :D :grouphug: |
love this story line can you pm me please,and please due continue i'm new reading this story,thank's for posting it. |
I just started reading this story. I'm really digging it so far. I've only read up to chapter 4 part 1. I didn't want to read anymore with out the next chapter lol. If it wouldn't be too much of a bother could you send me the pm chapters so I can catch up. Thanks so much, can't wait to read the rest. |
Ok, so just so you yunguns know, OLD DON'T MEAN STOOPID! Kathy, looks like we're in this together, my sista! Since I've been teh youngest of 9 kids my whole life, I'll enjoy the roll as "big sister" around here! Sa...weet!:slem: |
Good lord. You weren't lying when you said that you don't hold back. Excuse my french but that was sexy as f*ck. And I'm talking about chapter 4... I can't wait to see what the other naughty chapters have in store. :drool: *continues reading* |
Just read up to chapter 9. I plan on finishing the rest a little later, but I have to say I really like it so far. I'm glad that Michael and Ava worked things out. |
Girl, you funny!~ Keep talking, I feel a spankin' coming on~! Us elders is allowed to spank you yunguns. It's in the "over 40" contract, I swear! Honest! Hey, how's the story coming along? Any more hot sexy steam coming from that Birthday Boy's hotel room? I sure hope so~! :hoplol::slem::bleh::dance::yes::happy: |
So I finally finished all the chapters. And I love the story even more lol. Those pm chapters just kept getting better and better by the way lol. I couldn't believe that jerk Lucas drugged Ava, i'm glad she got away. The thing with her dad was sad, but also sweet in a way. The last two chapters were great. And I soo want that shower, i've never even seen something like that, makes me jealous lol. Update soon, you left off at quite an interesting spot. |
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What'up, Sis??? Ava's ***hole had to go to physical therapy after the shower episode to be sized down to normal and re-shaped!!!! No-more-hotsa for a while!!! :toofunny: :aw: I miss you, Nicki... ^^ smilie is too weak to describe... just how I'm feeling right now... I miss my Nicki-boo!!!! :hkcry: Ahhhhhh.... that's more fitting! |
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No!!!! :eek3: Copy/paste/save on a thumb drive! I have purchased one especially for my wittle 'projects'! :hoplol: It'll save you the hard labor girl! I have missed you 'so' much that I could faint... :thud: but I'm thankful you got the pow-vah back!!! Running off to PM you now~ :wink: |
Oh, damn, honey, that sucks! I've been there, though. I decided with the story I'm writing to save on a thumb drive, just in case. Actually, when I started writing it, we had our old Dinasour computer and my hubby's work laptop. I couldn't very well leave my Michael Porn Smutt on THAT, now could I? Yikes, can you imagine? Anyway, I feel for you on that, my dear. Question removed. Answered myself. Anyway, hope you get it all figured out. Maybe by then, Ava's A$$hole will have returned to normal size. :hoplol: |
Hey, you're the one who inflicted that torture to poor Ava's A$$hole! WE just commented on it, right, Kathy? We was just being good fan fiction stewards, expressing interest, interjecting commentary at points we feel relevant to the plot or story line. The size of the POLE used in that plot, makes the story line HUGE! You wrote it, sista, we's just layin' it down how we read it! |
:thud: :rescue: My reaction after having read EVERYTHING. -groans- where's a boyfriend when you need one? |
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Not me, man, nuh uh! My husband's half Greek, and he's been trying to ring that bell for 20 years! I told him NEVA! I don't have any tattoos, and not sure I'd get any, but if I did get one, it would be right on the top of my a$$, and it would say EXIT ONLY! :yuk: Not my thang! Oh, wait, was that TMI? |
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| FaLLeN_aNgeL | 22nd November 2010 03:58 PM |
Girl,i miss the story!
Update soon,please! :blush2:
Update soon,please! :blush2:
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:worthy: I'm in love...:wub: ...and addicted :hoplol: You gotta send me those PM's. :dance: P.S. :give_flowers: |
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I hope you can get all your things again :wink: |
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Hey, babe, how's the post-birthday Ava and Michael doing? Any luck with the laptop retrieval, or is it memory retype do over? Either way, hope it comes together soon. This hotter than hot couple have a faithful following, and we all recharged the batteries while we was waitin! :slem: |
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How naughty are you girls! I'm sat in church reading ur replies and you have to mention THE FORCE didn't ya vicky!!! Fuuuuk I'm going to hell ! |
You were IN CHURCH (with :whistle:'ling :angelplease: cherubs singing: 'aaaaahhhhhh") reading about 'THE FORCE' and 'THE CLACKER'??????? Yup!!! HELLBOUND!!!! :devil: (laughing: ah-ha-ha-ha-aaaaa!!!) :toofunny: :toofunny: :toofunny: :toofunny: :toofunny: :toofunny: :toofunny: :toofunny: :toofunny: |
hello,am a new reader here.love the story so far.can i get the pm chapters? :wink: |
So wait, lemme get this straight. You were in church, like IN CHURCH, reading Michael Porn on a handheld device? IN CHURCH? And you're worried about our comments sending you down Hot Town? I think you be taking the Steam Train long before us angels piped up with our comments. Right, girls? Mind you, there's a HIGH chance we'll all be on the train with you, but still. |
You girls are so naughty! :slem: :hoplol: |
Yes, isn't it GREAT? |
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Hi, i am a new reader and i love this story. I am happy that Michael and Ava are together they are great couple. Can´t wait for another chapter. :yes: Also can you send me the PM chapters please? |
Ok OK I admit it I was reading Michael porn in church on a hand-held but he's just so damn irresistible, even Jesus couldn't keep me away :toofunny: Suz me and YOU girl got front row seats to the hot stuff ain't we? At least we'll have each other doll :wub: |
Can I git a AMEN |
Hi, I just started reading the story and I like it so far. Could you please send me the PMs? Thanks |
I miss the story! :boohoo: |
Ohhh my god! You updated! :crazylol: Awww,he's so sweet! And reading this story is a pleasure,believe me! :) |
yayyyyyyy you updated!:D i've been waiting so long. Few I'm glad he was honest with her and she understood because that would be pretty soon. Wonder what he's gonna do about Lucas... Great update, Can't wait for more:) |
Yay!! You updated!! And a great update that was! I I loved it-I'm pretty sure that they wll get married but Mike is right. Its a little too soon for them to get married but they really are cute together. :) |
Great update!!! I like how he was honest with her about the proposal . They are so cute together. |
LOVED THE UPDATE Aunt Nicki!!! Michael & Ava are just so cute and lovely :wub: After Mike put it down, I'm surprise she could even bend over and pick up his shirt lol I'm glad he was honest with her, and told her it was just his high off sex talking about the marriage. It is fairly early in their relationship. They need to just cruising and taking their time for right now... Because let us not forgot we have things to deal with: Jive ass Lucas :dry: & Grace....I don't know if she is going to be a big problem. Well, yes she is because she still stuck on the MJ stroke, and it's gonna cause some friction sooner or later. I believe... Loved it! Can't wait for the next add!!! |
BABBBBYYYYYYY YAY!!!!! Update, now just to rub it in whilse im writting this I'm listening to MICHAEL yeah baby I have the new album and its the bomb!!!!!! Listening and bopping and reading about sexy 50 year old Michael what else do you need???? Baby I LOVE YOU TOO my twinny and thank you for the dediction you know we're always here for you :wub: OK lets get down to sexy Ava and can I just say gahhhhhhh I love the whole her observing Michael as he sleeps, geezuz i would get up 1hr earlier just to do that and the wau you described it all baby you had me swooning, seriously it was soooooooo beautiful it felt like it was me looking at him Quote:
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Nicki, I won't elaborate on my 'in summation:' comments because I've yikkety-yakked enough - except to say: FANTASTIC UPDATE! and 'try' not to take so long delivering the next one?? Pwease??? :bighug: :give_flowers: |
| middy | 13th December 2010 07:25 PM |
Hmm...
I missed a update??
How did that happen:brow:
Maybe i was toooo busy recovering from reading the lastest video diaries chapter on the other site:blush:
My appologies nicki:give_flowers:
Great chapter as always
love ths fic x
I missed a update??
How did that happen:brow:
Maybe i was toooo busy recovering from reading the lastest video diaries chapter on the other site:blush:
My appologies nicki:give_flowers:
Great chapter as always
love ths fic x
| suzmary | 13th December 2010 08:05 PM |
Ok, can't comment in length right now (mmmm, why does the word length make me think of MIchael?) cuz I've gotta go to work, and of course I wanna read what Vicky and Kathy and everyone else has to say, but I LOVED IT!
Sweet, sexy, and just about the right mix of two months' into a new relationship. Well, I mean, not that I'd remember any of that, seeing as how I've been hopping on the same pogo stick for over 20 years, but still!
Ok, gotta go wait on people I don't care about, and do things for them I don't wanna do, but I'll be back either tonight or tomorrow for a more thorough and sufficiently organized comment.
Till then, YOU ROCK, GIRL! Glad you finally put it down! (Oooo, sounds dirty, too! I think I'm sensing a pattern here on my part! I'm in the gutter! Don't worry, peeps, I LIKE IT! :slem:)
Sweet, sexy, and just about the right mix of two months' into a new relationship. Well, I mean, not that I'd remember any of that, seeing as how I've been hopping on the same pogo stick for over 20 years, but still!
Ok, gotta go wait on people I don't care about, and do things for them I don't wanna do, but I'll be back either tonight or tomorrow for a more thorough and sufficiently organized comment.
Till then, YOU ROCK, GIRL! Glad you finally put it down! (Oooo, sounds dirty, too! I think I'm sensing a pattern here on my part! I'm in the gutter! Don't worry, peeps, I LIKE IT! :slem:)
Hey, sexy lady! I did love the update, and like everyone else, have imagined many times waking up next to him, and watching him in slumber. I think everyone who's a fan, a REAL fan of him as a man, a person with a heart and soul, a father, can't but to imagine that. It seems he could never find any true peace, and even sleep eluded him so often that he needed help shutting it all down to get some on occasion. I didn't post that to get into any discussion about ... anything, just that we'd all have loved to see him in peaceful slumber, right? I agree with Kathy, and Vicki, and everyone else, Mikey was scared but recovered well. I think there's wedding bells for them, maybe. I feel he's comfortably happy with her, and that's a good thing. Glad you got the computer figured out, and hope you can update soon. This was a great chapter, hon. |
Just read part 4, girl you're amazing! I missed these two, I thought Michael would botch it this time like he did their first morning after but thank God he had enough sense to find the right words. I can't wait to see what he has in store for good ol' Lucas. I hope it involves lots of pain *insert evil laugh* |
Damn I didn't even realize I had missed this update. It was great, I loved it! It was the perfect followup to the last chapter. And Michael did a really good job talking himself out of what his peesh made him say lol. Michael and Ava were just too perfect in this chapter. I can't wait for the next update =) |
I want an update!! :boohoo: But don't worry,i'm a patient person...xD |
:dance: I'm ready for my uuuupppppdate!!! :bump: |
MEE TOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!! |
I feel bad. :aw: I haven't been reading and commenting like I should. But, it looks like it's gonna be another restless night for me. So I'm gonna spend it playing catch-up. :yes: And to make up for lost time, I'm gonna reply for EVERY chapter! So be ready! :hoplol: |
Chapter One: Older Mike. :slem: Quote:
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Nicki, Please send me chapters 4.2 9.4, 10.2 and 11.2 & 3 Thanks hun, I am reading you story now. So far loved the first chapter :) |
Chapter 2: Poor Michael. :aw: Was it possibly Joseph he was dreaming about? :dontknow: ( When Mike took those small blue pills, my mind went totally sideways for a second. :ph34r: ) Kinda sad he had to take pills to get back to sleep but I understand. Glad he's not gonna 'use' Ava. Oh! He's thinkin' about her. :happy: Which means he's gonna wanna see her again! :dance: |
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Hmm..Mike's showin' her a little somethin' somethin.' :slem: She's going to go see him. Does that mean his children are going to be there? :dance: Wonder what will happen if they aren't there. :wink: Well, it looks like sleep decided to finally work its way into my body ( at 5:28 in the morning. :dry: ). I shall pick up later today and hopefully finish my mission of replying to every chapter. Hope you don't mind me doing this by the way. :) |
Chapter 4: :thud: I am speechless... You know what would make an awesome 18th birthday gift? The PM to these chapters. :dance: Too bad it's not for another two years. :aw: |
Chapter 5: :omgnoz: WTF Michael?!?! :eek: You lost a brownie point in my book :dry: ( Honestly all he has to do is smile and he'll get 500 billion of 'em :heha: ) But seriously, that was some major bull right there. Not happy at all. :dry: Yea, this'll be my last post for a few hours before I get warned. I'll continue to read, but I'll type my comments in Word come back and post them. :yes: Figured you might wanna see someone else's comments. :toofunny: |
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Chapter 6: We got a more thoughtful and deeper Michael. Aw, all he wants is love. I'll give him some lovin'. :slem: :toofunny: He better call her and apologize...or else :dry: |
Nicki Baby girl, I have finally caught up...I have to say loved all the chapters they're all great esp the hot chapters. Ava and Mike just sweet and cute they I don't like the fact he was kinda rude at the start but least he warmed up to her in the end. Please do continue can't wait for more hun xx |
Chapter 7: :cute: I love Elizabeth Taylor. Look like she was the kick Mike needed in his behind. :heha: Shawna seems like really good friend/cousin. Happy to see she stood up for Ava instead of that Jason guy. It's been known that sometimes the women would take the man's side instead of her friend. :aw: So many flowers!! :wub: That poem was insanely beautiful! And he brought her a star. :ohmy: |
Chapter 8: Oh Mike...Ava. :aw: Their pain feels so real. I hope as I read on, I read more about Ava's story and the kind of relationship she had with her father. I can only IMAGINE the things Mike went through during the trial. But each day he on a brave face for us and continued to smile. :) Yes! Mike apologized. :dance: Oh oh oh! They're going to see each other again. :yeahbaby: Well, if they're at Mike's again, does that mean the kids will be there since they weren't last time? :smug: |
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Most defiently loved the things Mike pointed about Ava that he loved. :happy: Michael and his gentlemenness. Why can't their be more guys like him? :yes: Chapter 9 - Part 2: She fell asleep talking to him. :heha: And he listened to her sleep. :hoplol: ( When my friends do that to me, I yell in the phone screaming at them to wake up. :toofunny: ) I absoluetly love Mike's apperication/adoration/love for his children. The peguins are my favorite part of Madagascar. Although that Hippo comes close with that song of his. :heha: OMG! Blanket is too adorable for words. :cute: I don't know why, but whenever I see Paris's eyes, I always say she's got Debbie's eye color but she defiently got Mike's sparkle. Paris is really smart for her age, I just hope she can understand what Mike wants/is doing. Mike texting amused me for some reason. You hardly, if at all, ever the saw the man talking on a phone (well besides those rare photos, but I guess that's why they're rare. xD) Chapter 9 - Part 3: I lol'd at Ava's first impression of Bill. We all know he's just a big softie. :heha: Well, maybe not when comes to those really overzealous fans. :mellow: I am so jealous. They have a Wii. I don't. :dry: I gotta give Ava props for the 'Dark Knight' comment. :slem: :heat: cliffhanger. :hoplol: |
I really am blind. I totally did not see Part 5. :omgnoz: :ohmy: Blanket. :boohoo: Ava has some major insecurities and sorta a small fuse. :mellow: Grace :dry: She's only doin' that 'cause she wants Mike all to herself. :fine: Oh shit. Mike said it. He said it! :eek: Gotta admit, that's a bit harsh, but if makes her shut-up I'll take what I can get. :tlaugh: |
Chapter 10 Part 1: I gushed with happiness when Ava said that by hanging with Paris she felt closer to Mike. :excited: Lucas, to put it bluntly, is an @ss. :dry: One small white lie is always the start of some much bigger shit. :mellow: Holy...Michael and role-playing. :thud: :toofunny: Her snoopy PJ's. Chapter 10 Part 3: Michael's nightmares. :aw: At least she didn't call him out. Her small but subtle jester was sweet. :) Love her dad's mantra. Hopefully she'll follow it. :happy: By all means Ava, take the glass and smash it in his face. I think it would be a big relief for all of us. Quote:
*Sigh* Lucas is such an idiot. Doesn't he realize Mike has been dealing with things like this before he was probably born. Man, it's amazing how the lust of money and a few minutes of fame can do to a person. :rolleyes: ...Wth?!? He put something in her drink? :ohmy: Oh hell no! :nono: That just made me seriously hate the guy even more and he's not even real! At least someone helped her. Most people would just walk away, or worse... Chapter 10 Part 4: Knight in Shining armor. Chapter 10 Part 5: Oh! She 'met' her father again. I cried. No, more like bawled my eyes out. :boohoo: I can understand her wanting to stay with her father. But Mike, being the man he is, never gives up. :no2: One of the most emotional chapters I've read in the longest time. Chapter 10 Part 6: :shocked: She was able to pull off that 'beautiful mess' look? With mascara and everything?! :ohmy: Wish that was possible for the rest of us. :heha: Looks like this is where everything is laid out on the table. Finally lol. :hoplol: :toofunny: I was right! An added bonus was that Mike agreed AND laughed. Oh yeah! I'm awesome. :wink: :dance: For some crazy reason, when Michael said he'd deal with Lucas and soothed Ava, these images popped in my head. SPOILER: SPOILER: By the grace in which we call God, those three words have finally hit the paper! :yeahbaby: |
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And there you have it! :D A comment for every chapter/part that I was able to read. :dance: Hope you enjoyed them. :wink: |
When will we get an update? I'm missing this story so much... :aw: |
CONGRATULATIONS ON WINNING BEST NON-ROMANCE YAY!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Got to be your 800th 'thanked'. :happy: |
Well deserved baby |
| -OFFtheWall- | 31st December 2010 12:03 AM |
CONGRATS AUNT NICKI!!!
| FaLLeN_aNgeL | 31st December 2010 03:14 PM |
Congratulations Nicki! You deserve it! :) :wink:
Hey babe! :bighug: Happy New Year's Eve!!!! I can't hit this chapter like I 'really' want to right now (at work :yuk: sick :sick:), but BOY was I glad to see it!!!! :crazylol: I got just a 'few' points - things that jumped out at me and well... you know me. I just couldn't wait... Quote:
No! I ain't joking! :ph34r: Oooo- thanks babe! :huggle: Thank you for the update! I knew you were just pullin' my leg when you kept sayin' - soon. :wink: I'm going to give you the usual, full-blown comment that you deserve in the near future girl - but please allow this mini comment to suffice for now. Wonderful update! P.S. I don't want a divorce either! :kiss: Happy New Year!!! :cheers: |
Babyyyyyy YAY!!!!!! update OMG I swear I didnt realise how much i missed these two but I diiiiiiid ohhhh god the clouds are about to roll in arent they??? hmmmmm I'll be back to coment its 5:30 am NEW YEARS DAY so I will let you catch up to the year 2011 lollll love ya baby:wub: |
Great update nicki I can understand why ava is feeling so insecure i hope she doesnt say anything she might regret though:brow: Cant wait for the next chapter x |
I hope she tells Michael everything Grace's hating ass said! I hope Mike really does love her and keeps her around for a long time so Grace can see who the real woman in his life is. |
Hello :highspeed:. I just started to read your story, Nicki. I find it very well written although something strange seems to be going on....... there seem to be some parts missing :hmm:. I read somewhere that they are called PM's or something like that? :unsure: Could you please send me the first so that I can find out what it is you all are talking about? Cause I have no idea :innocent:. Thank you in advance :hehe:. Oh and Happy New Year :cheers:. :hoplol: |
Hey, Nicki babe, LOVED this update! Missed these two, and I am enjoying the interplay they're working with. She's getting more insecure, and he's getting more secure. Hmmmm, Grace needs a kick in the teeth, too! I'd have suggested the a$$, but that sista's GOT BACK, so she wouldn't even feel it! Boy does she need to feel a good kick, too! Messin' in ish that don't concern her, and Michael made that perfectly clear to her already. She's "The Nanny" and no more. Michael rolled with her, and then rolled over and quickly walked away, NO TURNING BACK. Get over it, Grace, your ship has SAILED, Sista! Stop hatin' on Ava cuz Michael's in love with her. Oh, and leave Paris OUT of your nasty azz jealous hatin', let the girl make up her own mind about Ava. She's just another heffa out to mess in Michael's biznizz! Step off, Grace! Now Bill, he needs a hug! He's a stand-up guy, and he knows Michael better than anyone, even Grace. Loved the update, sweetness. Can't wait to find out if the next bit will need a PM. HOpe so! :slem: HAPPY NEW YEAR, EVERYONE! |
:yeahbaby: An update!! :crazylol: Thanks for such a warm welcome. :wub: Michael and his sly self. Aksin' her if she'd invite him. :highspeed: All this kissing through the cloth is reminding me of MJ's fans. :wink2: SPOILER: Grace is being a b!tch. :dry: :ohhellnaw: How dare she say that. I think someone needs to let go of the past. :rolleyes: ...Gosh Mike and his eyes... :thud: I most defiantly loved the update. :wink: Can't wait for the next one. :dance: HAPPY NEW YEAR!! :) |
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!! :cheerleader: Nicki Babe, thanks for the update. I can't believe Grace is talking about Ava like this that woman needs a slap over the head and needs to stay out of Michael's Buisness. |
I can't believe Grace said that about her. I agree with Bill-that they should just stay out his love life and let Mike deal with his own relationship. But anywayz...I wonder what it is that thet are going to talk about. :brow: Awesome update as usual! Can't wait for the next chapter!! |
Could you please send me the first PM-chapter, Nicki :cute:. Please.... I'm dying to read on but I can't if I don't have the link http://www.laymark.com/i/o/81.gif. I'm 18+ if that's what you worry about. Hell, I'm more than twice 18+ :dry:. You know me...... I read the Diaries :highspeed:. If you have the time to send me the link ofcourse :cute:. No rush though :angelplease:. *bats eyelashes at you* |
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I'll say it myself to keep you from saying it: "Girl! You nasty as hell!!! :toofunny: But I sense that they will need a little 'relief' after they 'relieve' themselves!!!! :slem: :heha: The update was long-awaited, much anticipated, and very much worth waiting for~ :yes: Fantastic job! :wink: So until next time... :loveyou: Signed, Your Boo :wub2: :kiss: |
About TIME you added :dry: lmao sike naw Auntie Nicki :bighug: you know I :wub: you.... NOW that is out the way.... Ava, sweetie, I'ma need you to reload! Don't let what you heard change your mind about things. The best thing she can do is go to the source= Michael, and ask him what is really good. I can understand her reluctance, because she heard others that are close to him state their opinions about the situation. But that's all they are...OPINIONS...their opinions don't mean sh*t because it isn't Michael's... And you know this Grace? Michael better nip that in the bud, fire her ass or something because he lay it down on her as well. And she still stuck on the stick, and she is not going to ease up if Ava is around. Smh, I wonder how Ava will react when she do find out they had something going on once before...:hmm: Loved the add Aunt Nicki |
God! Grace is such a B!tch!!! I really loved the update! You're amazing girrrl!! :wink: |
Awe nicki that was a beautiful chapter please pm me when it ready hun x |
Amazing job girl,as always! :yes: I wonder what kind of tour that might be...xD And i can't wait to read that PM!! :crazylol: |
:yeahbaby: Got me my WYGIW fix. :happy: Ava's story, so gut-wrenching. :cries: So beautiful and downright sad at the same time. :boohoo: Oh man, I too worked up to leave a proper review. I'll come back after I calm down. :) |
that was beautiful. pm me please |
Beautiful chapter my heart goes out to Ava. Hope mike can help her get through all that pain. Please pm me the rest. |
Ok, I'm better now. :) Beautiful, lovely, amazing chapter. Emotions after emotions were spilled out. Ava's heart laid out on her sleeve for the world (Michael) to see. Her recollections of her childhood, the moment I've been dying to read since forever. And it finally came! :happy: Her grandparents story is simply lovely despite the hardships they faced. IMO, it made them stronger. The Father-Daughter dance...:wub: I've always wanted to do that with my father. Hopefully one day I'll get the chance. :D Michael, such the gentleman....then he's back to being a horndog. :heha: If I haven't said it all ready, loved the update. :cupidwub: |
Wonderful chapter Nicky, they are both opening up with each other, but she didnt tell him what she over heard. Her life story is so sad. Please Pm me when your done. Thanks |
Loved the add! Girl I'm sitting here speechless with all Ava revealed. That is all she needed though because you can't hold all whats going on inside all the time, you need a outlet to let it out. And Michael :wub: was her outlet, and I just hope he let Ava be his outlet as well!! And when he was talking about Blanket's mom just leaving it was just....:aw: but we all know you can't turn no "free spirit" a.k.a ho into a house wife....:laughehe:... Michael about to wax that ass....bring on the PM :slem: HAAAAAAA :D |
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Jazzi!!! ^^^ :toofunny: Aww, hunny. I was sooo 'touched' after reading that chapter. I just felt like :boohoo: a little - not just from sadness, but from happiness. You're right. This chapter was very deep. It'll take me a minute to digest it, but you know I'll come back when I do. Simply beautiful~ :give_rose: |
Aww.. I'm glad they had that heart to heart. They are really growing in their relationship, they're opening up to each other.. And her house is gorgeous! And he's finna see more than that bedroom, huh?? Yeah, he's finna wax that! Get it Mike! PM me please! |
I'm so glad she let Michael know about her parents, especially her dad. I know it was hard for her to talk about but it just shows how much she really loves and trusts Mike. Beautiful chappy hun! PM me please?! :) |
im glad she opened up great update pm me please |
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Yaaayy, I'm all caught up :claps:. But first things first....... Nicki...... girl..... you need to post a warning to whomever comes late to the party and asks you for the PM link :dry:. I couldn't resist and read every single PM chapter in one sitting :eek3:. Not good....... not good at all :rescue:. OMG :heat:...... I'm still trying to recover from them :dizzy:. Breathe Yana, breathe ........ Okay.....okay I have calmed down now :ph34r:. This story is amazing, Nicki. The characters are so wonderfully written and the detailing is so vivid. Mature Michael is just :drool:. Ava is such a cutie pie :wub:. The bodyguards are just concerned about their bosses wellbeing I think :hmm:. Coz that's what they are for right? To protect his wellbeing. They are just taking it a bit too far :lol3:. Could be wrong about them though. But then comes Grace, the c*ckblocker :mad:. She needs to understand that she has to stop meddling in Michael's personal life and sit her ass down where it belongs. In the corner. She is gonna stir up some problems in the near future, me thinks :hmm:. Ava's appartment is just :drool:. I want it! It's amazing...... And their talk was heartbreaking :boohoo:. That poor girl had it rough and I totally understand her feeling that what she is experiencing right now seems to be too good to be true. It's so wonderful that Michael totally understands where she is coming from and he will be her shoulder to cry on. I can't wait to read more. I love it :crazylol:. I love everything about it :crazylol:. |
Nicki baby OMG what a chapter both parts were absolutely breathless, I loved them both from the kissing and groping in the car, the flashback with Grace :ph34r: which I have to rtell you grrrrrrr it had me worked up so much I just wanted to bash her head in, to Michael finally going up to Avas apartment and finally to Avas heartwrentching story. This chapter had me angry, swooning, hot and bothered, terribly sad and just an emotional wreck. All in all it had me wanting more and needing more of these two. I missed them so much and I am soooo glad that you have updated and twice in a matter of days, it must be in the air lol Ohhh god these two are just gahhhhhh and Michael is simply insatiable, I mean the man cant get enough of her and do you blame him?? Heck no I dont shes a sexay fyyne thing but to say that this was all one sided would be a lie they are eachothers drug eachothers reason for happiness. They literally make me swoon and the fact that he is old enough to be her father isnt an issue you would never guess that she was younger, they both share insecurtities they both have a past they have been hididng from one another, but alas I'm jumping the gun here. Now lets talk about the whole invite to the apartment , boy did she freeze didnt she?? But I understand it I mean who wouldnt be she knows dollar wise she isnt in the same calibre as him, and socially she isnt, what she needs to realise is that Michael doesnt care about those aspects he doesnt judge a book by its cover but by the story inside of the covers. Babe the whole sneaking around like the CIA had me giggling I loved the way you described this scene and I have to tell you I pictured the scene vivdly from the elevator bay to getting in the elevator the glasses, the mask, the baseball cap heheehhe I loved it but can I tell you it amuses me to this day that Michal thought that mask was icognito, I mean everyone knew that he was the only one that would wear a surgical mask and it was as much a part of his image as the sequined glove and the fedora was :hoplol: Quote:
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Now lets get to that bitter taste in my mouth, hmmm what is that taste?? Thats the taste of my bile rising look around* and there she is GRACE:ph34r: Ooooooo I tell you girl you had my blood boiling when I realised that Ava was listening in on the convo....Grace the tought makes me want to vomit http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c6...chunda2003.gif Seriously this girl needs to step away, who in the hell does she think she is?? Michael's wife??? Michael she needs to be taken down a peg or two but the sneaky wench is getting others to do her dirty work becasue she knows if she says anything to him he will toss that bony ass out on the street. I just wanted to bodyslam the biatch http://i299.photobucket.com/albums/m...J/BodySlam.gif Quote:
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Babe this Part was simply divine loved every word now for part deux well, from the anger I was feeling it quickly turned into hurt and tears. I mean babe Avas story is so heartbreaking. You just never know what a person hides and until they are ready to reveal themselves and show you that part, that vulnurability then theres no point in pushing someone, they have to be ready and ready she was. Finally we saw that wall getting broken and we saw the purity in her soul, that innocence that Michael has fallen in love with. I have to tell you I felt Michael frustrations about Ava not being able to open uo and knowing there was something up, something going on deep inside, if it had been any other man he would have thought her mood swings were the cause of PMS...but not our boy he aint insensitive like that :no2: he knows his woman. Finally Ava lowers that wall and she starts talking, such a sad background her grandparents went through so much I just cant imagine those years and the things people endured to get to a better place. WOW Nicki you certainly surprised me with this because I never expected we would get two for the price of one. Quote:
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Nicki baby brilliant chapter 12 both parts were absolutely gahhhhh you have me wanting more please dont keep us waiting too long, and whats this??? A PM??? hmmmmm do I need to aks for it???http://i563.photobucket.com/albums/s...ho/begging.gif PLEAAAAASE MAY I HAVE THE PM Onne more thing before i head out of your thread CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR WIN!!!! |
I really missed this story !! Great updates !! |
| suzmary | 5th January 2011 08:02 PM |
Nicki, girl, late to the game, but you KNOW I got a lotta love! this was sweet and telling, and I think a turning point for both. They let out stuff, big stuff, the kind you tuck under the rug of your private thoughts so no one knows.
Michael, he's so cute, always fretting cuz he's older than her. Then always the horn dog, in the end, cuz he's a guy! :hoplol:
Kay, girl, if there's a PM to be had, BRING IT, BABE! they could get some "make up lovin' goin' on!" I'm down wit that! :slem:
Michael, he's so cute, always fretting cuz he's older than her. Then always the horn dog, in the end, cuz he's a guy! :hoplol:
Kay, girl, if there's a PM to be had, BRING IT, BABE! they could get some "make up lovin' goin' on!" I'm down wit that! :slem:
WAAAAAX!!! :drool::drool::drool: Michael turned Ava out, got her all demanding, but I don't blame her! YOU GOT IT, DEMAND IT!! :thud: THAT WAS HOT AUNT NICKI!! :heat: :rescue: |
Hot!Hot!Hot. After reading that pm i am going out to roll in the snow left from the storm last week (i live in nyc:yes:) That was out of the world. You have a god given gift when writing the love making scenes I felt like I was right in the room with them. I even had to wipe the drool form my mouth a couple of times. I have to work late and all I can think about is Mike and Ava freaky a**. Man I want I some of all that good stuff Tanks for update and pm. |
Thank you for the Pmed chapter Nicki Babe, loved it it was Hot Hot Hot and did I say Hot :) |
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Nicki, you have written some FANTASTIC adult interludes between Mike & Ava. However, this was simply the most detailed, sensual, stimulating, and erotic PM of the entire fic! :thud: Excellent, excellent follow-up to the previous chapter! *slaps self* Great job, boo! :wub2: |
Huh ? Where am I ? ... Guess I fainted and woke up in Michael Heaven...?! This was goooooooood !! Sensual, loving.. forever Michael... ahw.. |
*fans self* Good God!!!! Whoo.. Mike put it DOWWNNNNNN!! :slem: Hell, he waxed it, smacked it, flipped it, rubbed it down, etc. Their sex life is INSANE! Ava is a lucky woman. It's good to see that they have more than just sex; it's love behind the action. They really love each other alot and their relationship will continue to grow and get stronger. That PM was amazing. |
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Thanks for the pm chappy nicki It was as always so eroticly hot:drool: |
Nicki,that was hot!! :crazylol: :drool: I wish i was her!!! Amazing job,girl! I really love it... :slem: |
WOW that PM was HOT!!!!! :blowup: It was so well written that I felt right there with them . :uhm::heat: Mike sure knows his girl and he knows exactly what she needs and he gives it to her LOL . Lucky girl . |
PM, please? |
Ok, Nicki babe, when I asked you to BRING IT you listened, girl! Boy did you ever listen! Yikes, that was HOT! |
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Beautiful, beautiful adds baby! I'm glad you're back on your roll. Can't wait for the next! :kiss: |
Finally...finally I've caught up on this amazing story. :dance:The last chapter broke my heart - hearing about her family. After all this time, it seems like she's finally opening up to Mike. I love the character of Ava, shes so full of mystery and intrigue. Can't wait for you to update. :wub: |
New reader here. I just finished chapter 4 part 1. I'm loving this story and wondered if you would send me the pm for the next part. Actually, count me in on the list for all of them, :laughehe: I see I have a lot of catching up to do on this story and tend to read as much as I can. |
Can You PM me too please? Thanks! |
i read a part of this story before but i started re-readin it again yesday and oh my godd.......sheesh.i love ava and mike.love the depth of their relationship.and yeah the sex too..... :heat: i cant wait to read more of this story. :D |
HAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWT!!!! OK babe I'm late to reply to this magnificent, delicious, tantalising EXTREMELY arousing chapter...Twinny I always thought we had very, VERY similar styles and it freaks me out in a good way I LOVE IT!!!! You my darling girl are one of the best smut writters on this board. You let it rip, all inhibitions are lost you really get the blodd pumping and coursing through my veins. This chapter was no exception you really took the bull by the horns and went for it. You really just floored me I loved it so much that including this time I think I have read it about 6 times now?? maybe 7??? hehehehe Hi my name is Vicky and I have an addiction to Nickis smut...seriously babe OMG. Now you know I cant go into detail but I have chosen some paragraphs that reaaaally had me going Quote:
Your descriptions in this was simply to die for....I felt like I was Ava at one stage ehehehe I know I'm desperate to be with MJ do you blame me?? 50 year old, I know what I want, sexy as MJ..... drool http://i213.photobucket.com/albums/c...ling_anim1.gif ok lets wipe this drool...bottom line is that YOU ROCK http://i911.photobucket.com/albums/a...345fcb5beb.gif NICKI ROCKS THE SMUT!!!!!! Ok look I cant help it I have to mention this and if I get banned well I have your smut hehehe GIRRRRL THE MIORROR WOOO HOOO!!!!! geezuz the mirror I died Nicki you know I like scenes mith mirrors....and this faint Quote:
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Just starting to catch up with this story. I just finished chapter 5. It looked like all was going well up until that point. She feels cheap and used and he sits silently. I wonder what is going on in his mind? Maybe just the embarrassment of Ava finding all his medications, this the reason he is so silent? I am eager to dive in and read further. |
Just finished chapter9 pt5. I'm glad Ava spoke to him and let him explain why he let her walk out of the door after their first night together. Wow, that was a lot of flowers he sent. Personally I loved the poem better. Adopting and naming a star after her is the icing on the cake. I can't help but worry bout the thought of Lucas lurking in the back shadows. We haven't seen anything but Ava and her cousin have hinted at the fact we could be seeing him again. Meeting Michael's children seems to have gone beautifully, even getting Paris in on the game. It was cute how Ava teased Michael about the movie they had watched that first night. Thoughtful of A to leave before the children woke up thinking of their well being. And Grace, she is a trip. Of course she cares for the kids, but she is not their mother. She is PAID to help take care of them. It is a job. Ok, Michael said he had been intimate with her and that she is probably just jealous. Well duh!! What woman in her right mind would not fall in love with him having had some of Mikey Jr. topped off with the charisma and charm that just oozes from his pores. :heartbeat: It may not be her place to voice her feelings, but being there day in and day out it would have to be hard seeing him with another woman. Kind of his own fault for being with Grace in the first place, but she has also got to respect that she is just an employee and not his wife. After all he said it had been 2yrs since their last encounter. I would also like to say that I elected to just keep reading instead of stopping and asking for the pm chapters. I really wanted to catch up. This story is wonderful even without them, they are just a hot added bonus i'm sure. :wink2ni3: |
Chapter 10 prt 6.. I knew it. I just knew Lucas was going to show up sooner or later. It was so good of Charlene to take care of Ava the way she did. Who knows what would have happened if she didn't. Of course she was starstruck when she saw Michael, but in the end her concern for Ava came through. I'm glad Ava told Michael everything about Lucas trying to extort money the min she was up and coherent. Michael's reaction was cute, laughing bout how the idea would go against all the tabloids had previously said about him. I am dying to know how Michael is going to take care of Lucas. Well, on with the reading. |
All caught up for now. I hope Lucas didn't do anything to Shawna |
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Truly, I don't know how to feel about this update. The writing, as usual, was superb and you're making us care for this couple more and more with each chapter. :wub: However, I'm waaaayyy past getting a bad feeling about Lucas and this whole mess. Can't wait for the next chapter, Boo. I need some answers! :bighug: |
I somehow not saw this update...What happen to Shawna!. Hope she'll be ok. Good update Nicki hun. I wanted the fanbar but somehow didn't work for me. Love the Fanbar though Good job Dani :) |
Great update girl! I'm responding pretty late huh? Lol sorry hun I was soo busy these last couple of days. But wow! I feel really bad for Ava. I really do hope Shawna is okay. :( Poor Ava... |
OK miss thang wheres this update you said you were working on it well??? Hurry upppppp love ya baby:wub: |
Hey new reader can you please pm me missing chapters so I can fully catch up. Thanks so much doll. |
OMG I'm only on Chapter 5 but I'm so f-in pissed I could **** fire! He's got to be kidding! He nails her through out the night(So I've guessed) but he can't even explain or at least give her answer to the simple question?!! Now to add more ish on top he says he's got a plane to catch to L.A.?!? He got to have the biggest set of balls ever some nerve! Poor Ava I feel so bad for her after the night she had she gotta wake up to that BS damn(Again I have not read the pm yet). I still have quite a few more chapter to read but I was wondering if you could pm me the x-rated parts...I do try and what's written before asking for the goods(why does that sound like I'm asking for drugs lol) but I can't wait...Why kind of moves was Mike pulling to have Ava body hurting like that. Now if I need to unhide my age let me no. I'll be back with another review after I have read the rest. |
I'ma need Ava to get it together! Don't let what you hear change your mind about things with Mike. The best thing she can do is go right to Mike , and ask him what is really going on. What Bill and Grace said was an opinions and guess what they dont f-in matter because it ain't Mike's... With this thing with Grace Mike need to nip this ish in the bud right now! I understand that she is only looking out for him and the childern but he lay down the law when she first brought it up. Somebody buy this chick a clue because she is not getting it! Ava need to let Grace now that she is not going anywhere anytime soon and if she has an problem with that...then thats what it is HER problem. Now, what the hell has happened to Shawan? Them telephone call are starting to freak me out! I bet Lucas has something to do with it(he was in the background) I'm thinking if he can't get to Ava they go to the next best thing! |
Update pleeeeeasssssssee x |
I'm missing the story girl,update soon please! :blush2: |
| Army of L.O.V.E | 18th January 2011 11:29 PM |
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Originally Posted by sexyeyes (Post 837281) Ladies I just want to apologize for keeping you all waiting for the next update but this is the first time in 2 days I've been able to get back on the board because of the access problems :ninja: I've been so p!ssed about this and I intended to add the next chapter on Monday but I couldn't get on :sad: and I so wanna add it tonight but I've just got home from a 10 hour shift and I'm sooooooooo tired so please bear with me and I promise it'll be up either tomorrow or Thursday at the latest!!! Thanks for sticking with me ya know I love you all :wub2: p.s. welcome to our new readers Menen and Kendra aka SweetAngel to the family!! Thanks for reading dolls and I hope you stick around for the Mike&Ava ride :wub: p.p.s. I will get around to replying to all of your individual comments too I promise :yourock: |
I can't wait!! :yeahbaby:!!
Better not be a PM part :homer:
Lol, jk jk...maybe :hoplol:
I just started reading this and I love it!! can you pm me the next chapter please! |
omg....cant wait for the update. :wub: |
Thanks for the heads-up, Nikki. Can't wait to read your next update! |
Thank you so much for the pm's doll. I just finished reading everything Bravo Bravo. I hope all these trials and tribulations work out for Ava and mike in the end. Can't wait for more update soon! |
WOOOOOOOOOHHHHHHHOOOOOOOOOOOOOO It's here!!!!!!!!! :woop: :cries: For a second I thought she was dead. But considering the condition she's in....:( If she loses Shawna...I don't know what I'll do. :boohoo: She's all Ava got besides Michael... DON'T LET HER DIE!! PLEASEEEEEEEEE!!!! I'M ON MY KNEES BEGGING!!! (not really but you get the point :heha:) Can't wait for the next one and news on Shawna. :bj: |
Wow... :ohmy: This just pulled on my heartstrings! :cries: Beaten to within an inch of her life? :boohoo: I could see that Ava's first thought is that it was a john too. But who? Shawna is so secretive about that part of her life, but Lucas knows who she was going to 'work' with. I wouldn't put it past him to act like he doesn't know who. I wouldn't put it past him to have set the whole thing up just to get back at Ava and Mike cUss bottom line... he feels like he deserves a 'cut' for hooking them up and something tells me that he hasn't just given up and gone away without it. So question is: what is Lucas' role in what happened to Shawna? :brow: I absolutely hated to see Eva push Michael off at first. I hated that her mind was tricking her into thinking that Michael in some way kept her from Shawna... BUT .... I was relieved again when she reached for his hand and allowed him to comfort her although something tells me we're not out of the woods with her roller-coaster emotions. Nevertheless, it felt good to see him step up into the 'man'and 'protector'role for her. It was also very touching when he referred to Ava as his 'partner' and Shawna as 'family'. He's a dear :wub2: Can't wait to get inside of his head! Enjoyed the update, girl~ :huggle: |
Ava is not taking this well at all. She is panicking and pushing Michael away. He is obviously hurt by this. Feeling somewhat numb to others feelings at a time like this is normal for most people. I'm glad she reached for his hand when the doctor comes in. Michael seems to realize why she has been acting the way she was by this point. I am glad Michael takes control and introduces himself before Ava can let her snide remarks out that she would regret once she realizes the doctor is sincere and respectful. I can't believe that Shawna is in a coma and barely made it through. Who would do such a horrible thing? I still have this gut feeling Lucas is behind it in someway or better yet did this himself. After the way he kept trying to threaten Ava I wouldn't put it past him. I know the doctor tried to warn Ava about what she was about to see. But it still doesn't prepare you once you are actually witness to it. I don't know how she is going to be able to handle it. Thank god Michael is there with her. Michael is so strong for her. Telling the doctor that Ava is his partner therefore Shawna is also family. She is going to be needing his strength. Shawna is alive but is going to have a long road ahead of her since she is not out of the woods yet. Very intuitive of Michael to know Ava's fears and knowing just what to say at just the right time. "I’m not going anywhere girl.” Thank you very much. I can't wait to hear Michael's point of view. |
OMG IT'S THAT DAMN LUCASI'm telling you it's him! He could not touch Ava so he had to go to the next best thing which is Shawna! Lucas is...gerr he something I just don't know what yet(bubbles monkey ish). Nicki...NICKI...Man you...them pm...man I'm at a lost for words. Almost gave me an heart attack...Ava is one lucky AOB! |
man i can so understand ava.its traumatic when the only person you have as family is in such a critical condition.i wish shawna recovers.please let her be okay. *prays* and michael being there for ava is really sweet and i hope he doesn't leave her ever. :no2: |
Great chapter nicki very emotional Mike is so supportive ava is just devastated shes pushing him away but she doesnt mean to, hope shawnas gonna pull through this ok x |
OMG!! Poor Shawna! :( :boohoo: Ava is so lucky to have a man like Michael... I guess she will recover at some point,right? Thanks for the update hun! I love ya!! :D |
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FINALLY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *falls down to the floor and cries with relief* I have finally started reading this story again! I swear, when I first read it last year in November (on my birthday to be exact) I was hooked. I feel bummed for not comenting on this sexy story buuut...damn, my life was just an unbelievable mess. I'm serious. It was stupid. I'm not joking :sad: But alas, this year is looking to be a very good one and I finally started reading again...more calmly than last year that is, and...girl, chapter 4 parte Dos needs a pm...so I was wondering if I could get it??? :cute: Pretty pretty please!!!!!!!! :angelplease: I gotta know what kind of dirty jokes Mr. Jackson is gonna say...por favor!!!! And can I say that I totally understand that Ava gets all tipsy quickly. I'm the same apparently :eek: On Christmas...I got a little carried away and drank a whole damn bottle of tequila with my sister...just me an her. But enough about me...Ava is as weak as me when it comes to liquor :heha: And Mike is soaking it all up :slem: Please..send me a PM dahling?? :cute: Por favor??? :grin: |
BEAT?!....TO ALMOST DEATH?! :dry: this has nasty ass LUCAS all over it man.... :cries: Ava was going through it when she was thinking about pushing Michael away, or keeping him near. I'm glad she didn't push him away because she needs him right now. She has to be strong for Shawna because the road to recovery probably isn't going to be easy for her :aw: Poor Shawna...I hope she pulls through.... Michael is so sweet :wub: reassuring her that he is going to be around. You just have to to love that man! Loved the update Aunt Nicki!! Update soon! |
Awww poor Ava. Well, I'm glad Shawna isn't dead. I feel so bad for her...she's upset and she's blaming herself. This is a really difficult time for her and I hope she'll be okay. :( Great update girl! |
| vicky | 25th January 2011 11:36 AM |
Hey babe ok first of all slap on some handcuffs and book me as the wrost friend and give me the award for the tardiest person on earth. Sorry my sweet girl you know I love ya, ok so lets dive deep into the abyss with this chapter. first i just want to say that for a chapter that had to be re-written after losing the original one, I would have never guessed that was the case. This chapter had it all, drama, anguish, frustrations and above all fear.
Oh my god poor Ava she tried so hard to keep it together and she she an amazing job, although she tried to keep her mind off of the worst case scenario she was still pretty amazing in my eyes. I cannot believe that this is happening to Ava I feel so awful for her because she feels guilty for finding happiness with Michael and spending the majority of her time with him. What she fails to see that this wasnt in her control and I wish she would stop that guilt because she is pushing Michael away, and I know she doesnt mean to do it but she is. I just hope Michael doesnt take it the wrong way and I hope he realises that this is her way of dealing with this devestating news.
Speaking of Michael OMG!!!!! He is just so amazing to Ava, he is her pillar of strength at the moment, he is the one that is stepping in and he is taking control of the situation, this esprecially had me swooning.
OMG this just confirms to me how much he really cares for her and although they arent getting married he is basically coming out of the closet with his relationship with Ava even if its with one person. Theres always a first step and this is it, its just unfortunate that its in this situation. But I am very proud at our man for standing up. Then babe this next part cemented my feelings for Michael.
*sigh happily* He's got you girl, he aint going no where. Okay so now that we have this sorted and we know that Michael is going to be there for our girl and not abandon her, its on to the important stuff Shawnas heath. WTF??? Nicki OMG what is goong on?? So shes in a coma shes been severly beaten and my heart dropped when the young doc told them. This really cant be happening, but I can see how Avas in denial over this whole situation and until she sees her then all these thoughts will swirl around her head.
Arggg and then you cut in on a cliffhanger....geezuz baby you really know how to keep us waiting and hanging. All I've got to say is that Shawna cant die, she just cant die. Ohhh baby please update soon I want to see what happens, I know that Ava seeing her cousin will gut her, she needs to see this ans go from there, step by step. I just hope she allows Michael to help her out and for her to realise that Michael will never leave her and that he's there for her.
LOVEDDDD the chapter baby it was simply divine baby.....awesome writting thank you for sharing your story with us babe, love ya:wub:
Oh my god poor Ava she tried so hard to keep it together and she she an amazing job, although she tried to keep her mind off of the worst case scenario she was still pretty amazing in my eyes. I cannot believe that this is happening to Ava I feel so awful for her because she feels guilty for finding happiness with Michael and spending the majority of her time with him. What she fails to see that this wasnt in her control and I wish she would stop that guilt because she is pushing Michael away, and I know she doesnt mean to do it but she is. I just hope Michael doesnt take it the wrong way and I hope he realises that this is her way of dealing with this devestating news.
Speaking of Michael OMG!!!!! He is just so amazing to Ava, he is her pillar of strength at the moment, he is the one that is stepping in and he is taking control of the situation, this esprecially had me swooning.
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Originally Posted by sexyeyes (Post 838686) ”I’m Ava’s partner Dr. Carter, Shawna’s family to me too” I hear the regret in his voice that he never got to meet her before today but I’m grateful for his tender words. |
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Originally Posted by sexyeyes (Post 838686) “I got you girl…” I hear him say over and over into my hair and this just makes things worse because I know if I lose Shauna well Michael is all I have and if I lose him… I cry even more at this realization and when he raises my head to look at him and his big brown eyes which are glazed over with worry searches my face; he realizes what I'm thinking, I know he does because he tells me so when he says ”I’m not going anywhere girl.” |
Arggg and then you cut in on a cliffhanger....geezuz baby you really know how to keep us waiting and hanging. All I've got to say is that Shawna cant die, she just cant die. Ohhh baby please update soon I want to see what happens, I know that Ava seeing her cousin will gut her, she needs to see this ans go from there, step by step. I just hope she allows Michael to help her out and for her to realise that Michael will never leave her and that he's there for her.
LOVEDDDD the chapter baby it was simply divine baby.....awesome writting thank you for sharing your story with us babe, love ya:wub:
Are you going to update soon,Nicki? Sorry for being so impatient,but i love this story too much! :blush2: |
yeah girl update it soon.pretty pleasee :angelplease: |
I am finally caught up and I absolutely love it. Michael and Ava are great, they have such a great story and I want more soon. It is so addicting! Thanks so much! Please more soon! The pm's are out of this world and the fiftieth birthday wow. You said you are rather blunt well keep it up that is the way I love it. Soon I hope! |
lol!it is addictive.i read this story atleast 3 times in the last month. :hoplol: take your time but not too much. :bleh: |
Ok I know you are having issues with the next update. In one sense I say take your time and in another I am saying Please Update soon love this so much and Miss it totaly. On the honest side Please take your time and know that this is so great! Please more soon! |
